Thread:ZoomTorch20/@comment-35502196-20180519084650/@comment-25228383-20180519155103

Hm. The quality of the art is great, but it’s a little unclear what’s happening. The character on the left seems a little cluttered, but I like the design of the character on the right. I think if you toned down the design of the left character and maybe gave a little space between the two, the clutter problem could be fixed.

Sorry if this comes off as rude, and note that I’m looking at this without context, so I may be wrong about one or two things.