Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26969297-20160331144728/@comment-27003551-20160504221524

Wilfur The Wicked wrote: WastedJunkie wrote: Yes, you must use the characters given in your story, in your case it's Flamzer and Footi.

You can use four more characters besides these two (excluding Nixels) (6 is the maximum number) Ok, I'll begin (I hope this gets qualified because I never use my Notepad and I don't have Word):

Sypnosis: When a frightened Flamzer is taken to the hospital, it ends up in a diagnosis for flaming disaster.

Characters:

Flamzer (Main)

Footi (Main)

Krader

Lunk (cameo)

Surgeo

Skrubz

Transcript:

''Takes place inside Mixopolis General Hospital where Flamzer waits impatiently with Footi on a twin set of chairs in the waiting room for their separate appointments, Footi waits with a smile on his face and a twisted leg while Flamzer is nervously shaking and wearing an icepack over his head. Meanwhile, many other background mixels (use your inmagination) are seen sitting in chairs waiting and reading alongside Lunk, who is listening to music from his headphones while conveniently holding a cubit for no apparent reason.''

Flamzer:  ( Brrrr.. ) Man, I can't take it anymore, Ive been waiting here for hours!

Footi: Oh don't be silly, friend! (Grabs out a pocket watch) It's only been 30 seconds.

Flamzer: (talking in a slightly fast but quiet manner) Yeah well, you don't feel that way when you have a bunch of ice cubes sittin' ON TOP OF YOUR HEAD! What are they gonna DO to me?? Are they gonna saw my legs off? Will they rip my belly open or worse (GASP!, voice gets louder) PUT MY TAIL OUT??

View widens to show Krader burst open through the hall doors with casting over a small section of his right arm.

Krader: (Shouting) EVERYONE, Krader is GOOD! Doctor say don't shake arm and all be OK! YAAAAAYY- (shakes his arm in excitement saying yay, causing it to crumble to pieces)- Ahhh!

<p style="font-weight:normal;">View switches back to the pair.

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Flamzer: (Screaming in horror) AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! (Jumps into Footi's lap ) NOT MY ARM! (whimpering with tears in his eyes) Sob... I love my beautiful arm...

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Skrubz rolls in front of the two during the trauma.

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Skrubz: Excuse me...

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Flamzer: (Shrieks in pure terror) Agh!

Skrubz: Um, w-which one of you is Footi again?

Footi: Here! (Footi gets up from his chair, Krader sits there in his absence holding the pieces of his arm) See you boys soon!

Flamzer: Whew, that was close...

Skrubz: Alright, then you mister Flamzer have your appointment ready with my bos-

Flamzer: WHOA, WHOA, NOPE! That's NOT ME!

Krader: Yup, it him.

Cut to a dark room, Flamzer is shaking in fear on a hospital bed under a dim light in the center.

Surgeo: Gah... darn lights! (Lights turn on revealing the entire room) Ah, there we go! (walks up to the bed) Ok, Flamzer what do we got going wrong today, buddy?

Flamzer: (Stares at him with utter contempt in silence)

Surgeo: Alright, so that's the tone you're going for, hold on... (reaches inside his cabinet body and grabs his reflex hammer) Ok, try and hold still...

Uses the hammer on all 4 legs, his arms, and his tail, Flamzer shrieks in pain each time.

Surgeo: OK, we're done... (Flamzer sighs in relief) with that step. (Flamzer gulps), alright as usual... (grabs a squirt bottle out of his cabinet)

Flamzer: (Shrieking and whimpering in agony) AGGGGHHHHHHH!!!! NOT MY TAIL!

Surgeo: Now Flamzer, don't worry it's only like last time, I just need to extinguish your excess body heat so I can take your temperature. Now hold still...

Surgeo misses with the squirt bottle as Flamzer moves his tail

Surgeo: Hey- hmmm...

He misses again, Flamzer's tail then appears behind him, he turns around to spray it, and then turns back and notices the sudden streak of flames that appear in his patience's absence.

Surgeo: Oh nooooo....

View switches to Flamzer sprinting down the flaming hall with Surgeo chasing him.

Flamzer: Nahhhh, I don't think so, doc!

Surgeo: COME BACK HERE!

They enter the waiting room, flames spread even further into the room, everyone except for Surgeo, Lunk, and Flamzer exit the building.

Lunk: (Sits in the chair, still listening to music) Duhhhhhh.....

Surgeo: (GASP) A Cubit!

''Lunk and Surgeo mix, they catch up to Flamzer and eventually pierce him with the cold syringe hand and put out the flames with ice boosters before crashing into a wall, the entire waiting room is frozen with the three lying on the floor, but the hall is still on fire. Footi appears next to the collapsed Flamzer with a single crutch for his casted leg.''

Footi: Hey buddy, how was your checkup?

Flamzer: It... was... GREAT!! And my arms didn't even fall off!

The two leave the scene happily.

Surgeo: (Pulls his phone out) Hello, MCFD? We got another fire in the hallway today. Yep, same patient... again.

(The end) This is one of the greatest shorts I've ever read. I hope you win.